Breakout Room 10: Update main.py #10
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Hey Trenisha! We left some comments on your code. Feel free to reach out with any questions!
| noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||
| plural_noun = input("Choose a plural noun: ") | ||
| second_noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||
| place = input("Name a place: ") | ||
| adjective = input("Choose an adjective (Describing word): ") | ||
| third_noun = input("Choose a noun: ") |
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Consider moving user input collection into a helper function and storing the values in a data structure (e.g., dictionary).
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",plural_noun,"in",place) | ||
| print ("Where the weather is always",adjective,".") | ||
| print () | ||
| print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Well it is.") | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") |
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I appreciate that your print statements are easy to read (and not one long line). Consider defining a function to construct the story and using an f string to consolidate these print statements.
| loop = 1 | ||
| while (loop < 9): |
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Since we know that we will have 10 rounds of gameplay, consider using a for loop here. It may also be helpful to use a more explicit variable name than "loop".
If you want to keep a while loop, the conditional loop will need to be while(loop < 11) to ensure the game repeats 10 times.
| // Displays the story based on the users input | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") |
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print ("For a duck may be somebody's", second_noun,",")
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