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<h1>Wallet Guide</h1>

<p>
Every single feature demonstrated below, this is a quick way to learn how
to use our wallet and experience what features exists.
Below is a quick way to learn how
to use the Blockcore wallet and some of its features.
</p>

<div class="guide guide-left">
<div><img src="/assets/guide/wallet-installation.gif" /></div>
<div>
<h3 id="wallet-installation">
<a href="/wallet/guide#wallet-installation" class="nolink"
>Installation of Extension</a
>
<a href="/wallet/guide#wallet-installation" class="nolink">Installation of Extension</a>
</h3>
<p>
You can install and use the Blockcore Wallet either as an browser
Users can install and use the Blockcore Wallet either as a browser
extension, or directly in a browser tab.
</p>
<p>
Some features are only available when installed as a browser
Please be aware some of the Blockcore Wallet features are only available when it is installed as a browser
extension.
</p>
<p>
<a
href="https://chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/blockcore-wallet/peigonhbenoefaeplkpalmafieegnapj"
>Install Extension</a
>
<a href="https://chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/blockcore-wallet/peigonhbenoefaeplkpalmafieegnapj">Install
Extension</a>
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<div><img src="/assets/guide/wallet-web-installation.gif" /></div>
<div>
<h3 id="wallet-installation">
<a href="/wallet/guide#wallet-installation" class="nolink"
>Installation of Web App</a
>
<a href="/wallet/guide#wallet-installation" class="nolink">Installation of Web App</a>
</h3>
<p>
You can install the Web Wallet using your web browser, giving the
wallet a dedicated icon on your start menu.
Users should install the Blockcore Web Wallet via a web browser, which will provide a dedicated icon on
their start menus for convenient access.
</p>
<p></p>
<p>
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<a href="/wallet/guide#wallet-create-wallet" class="nolink">Create Wallet</a>
</h3>
<p>
To get started, go through the "Create New Wallet" guide and select
which type of accounts you want to use.
To get started, users should go through the "Create New Wallet" guide and select
which type of accounts they want to use.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<a href="/wallet/guide#wallet-edit" class="nolink">Edit Wallet and Account</a>
</h3>
<p>
You can at any time edit your wallets and accounts. You can change
the name and icons.
</p>
<p>
You can also remove individual accounts and complete wallets and all
accounts in it.
Users can edit their wallets and accounts at any time, including changing names and icons.
Additionally, they have the option to remove individual accounts or entire wallets as needed.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<a href="/wallet/guide#wallet-create-account" class="nolink">Create Account</a>
</h3>
<p>
You can add multiple accounts to your wallets, even after the
initial setup.
Users can add multiple accounts to their wallets, even after the
initial setup has taken place.
</p>
<p>
Go to the menu on the top right, and choose "Add Account". Fill out
what network and other details you need.
Users should go to the menu on the top right, and choose "Add Account". They are required to select the
desired network and
then to provide details.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<a href="/wallet/guide#receive-payment" class="nolink">Receive Payment</a>
</h3>
<p>
You can receive payment either by using your next receive address,
or by creating a payment request.
</p>
<p>
Every time you receive payment, you get a new receive address. This
is for your privacy.
</p>
<p>
Address and Payment Requests can be shared as text by messenger,
e-mail, or by QR codes that can be scanned by mobile phones.
Users can receive payments either by utilizing their next receiving addresses or by creating payment
requests.
To enhance privacy, a new receiving address is provided for each incoming payment.
Sharing address and payment requests can be done through text messages, emails, or scannable QR codes using
mobile phones.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<a href="/wallet/guide#send-payment" class="nolink">Send Payment</a>
</h3>
<p>
You can send payment very easily and quickly. If you receive a
payment request, you can paste that and all fields will be
auto-filled.
Users can send payments easily and quickly. If they receive
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Why are "You" changed for "Users"?

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Because instructional documents are official documents; therefore, they have to be written in the third-person language (singular or plural). This is why we used the term "users" instead of "you"

payment requests, they can copy and paste the receiving addresses and all fields will be
automatically filled out.
</p>
<p>
You can enter a personal memo that is stored locally in your account
Users should enter personal memo's, which will be stored locally on their accounts'
history.
</p>
</div>
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<a href="/wallet/guide#address-book" class="nolink">Address Book</a>
</h3>
<p>
You can add your contacts and their address, for different networks,
to quickly send multiple payments to the same contact.
Users can add their contacts and contacts' addresses for different networks
to send multiple payments to them quickly.
</p>
<p>
When you paste contact address, we'll attempt to automatically
recognice what network it belongs to.
When users enter contacts' addresses, system will attempt to
recognize what network they belong to automatically.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<a href="/wallet/guide#settings" class="nolink">Settings</a>
</h3>
<p>
You can access settings from the left menu. It allows you to
customize the wallet according to your preferences.
</p>
<p>
More language support is added all the time, if your native language
is not yet supported, please let us know.
Users can access settings from the left menu. This feature allows users to
customize wallets according to users' preferences. For example, more language support is added routinely,
and users can select the desired languages.
If some of the languages are not supported yet, please let us know.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<a href="/wallet/guide#protocol-handler" class="nolink">Protocol Handler</a>
</h3>
<p>
First action in settings is Protocol Handler. This allows you to
register the wallet to handle links that have the "web+pay" prefix.
</p>
<p>
When this is enabled, when you click links that has a payment
request in it, the wallet will automatically open.
The first step to take is to go settings and to activate the Protocol Handler. This feature allows users to
register wallets to handle links that have the "web+pay" prefix. When this feature is enabled, users can click on the payment request links to open wallets automatically.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<a href="/wallet/guide#network-status" class="nolink">Network Status</a>
</h3>
<p>
The network status gives you insight to the current available
servers for the accounts you have in your wallet.
</p>
<p>
The buttons allows you to select a different than the automatically
selected server.
The network status provides insights to current available
servers for users' accounts in their wallets.
Instead of servers being automatically selected, users have the option to use buttons to choose different
servers.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<a href="/wallet/guide#change-password" class="nolink">Change Password</a>
</h3>
<p>
You can change the password that is currently used to securely save
your wallet on your device.
Users can change their passwords that are currently in use to save
the wallets on their devices securely.
</p>
<p>
The password should be as strong as possible. If your device is lost
and unlocked, an attacker can run computers to guess your password
and gain access to your wallet.
The password should be as strong as possible. If users devices are lost
and unlocked, an attacker can run computers to guess their passwords
and to gain access to their wallets.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<div><img src="/assets/guide/wallet-recovery-phrase.gif" /></div>
<div>
<h3 id="reveal-recovery-phrase">
<a href="/wallet/guide#reveal-recovery-phrase" class="nolink"
>Reveal Recovery Phrase</a
>
<a href="/wallet/guide#reveal-recovery-phrase" class="nolink">Reveal Recovery Phrase</a>
</h3>
<p>
Your secret recovery phrase, should at all times be kept secret and
Users' secret recovery phrases, should at all times be kept confidential and
hidden from others.
</p>
<p>
If you share this with anyone, they can take control of everything.
If users share the recovery phrases with anyone, their accounts will be exposed. This means strangers can
take control of everything.
</p>
<p>
If you lost your recovery phrase or need access to it, you can
reveal it with your password in settings.
If users lose their recovery phrases or need access to them, users can
reveal the recovery phrases by using passwords in settings.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<div><img src="/assets/guide/wallet-language-rtl.gif" /></div>
<div>
<h3 id="internationalization">
<a href="/wallet/guide#internationalization" class="nolink"
>Internationalization support</a
>
<a href="/wallet/guide#internationalization" class="nolink">Internationalization support</a>
</h3>
<p>
The world consists of many cultures and languages, we strive to
support multiple in the wallet.
support multiple in the Blockcore wallet.
</p>
<p>
From the language button accessible in the top menu, you can at any
change change between the supported languages, and we even correctly
change the orientation either from left-to-right or right-to-left.
From the language button accessible in the top menu, users can change between the supported languages at any
time. The system changes the orientation either from left-to-right
or right-to-left accordingly.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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