Fix grammar and enhance clarity (#1387)

* Fix grammar and enhance clarity 

Corrected grammatical errors and improved clarity in the text.

* Update chap_00162.txt

* Correct 'scenario' to 'constellation' in chapter 165

* Update chap_00168.txt

* Fix grammatical error in chapter 161 text

Author: Bittu5134

chapters/orv/chap_00161.txt

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ We walked along the street. Noise came from the bustling shopping district.
 "Me too."
 As the awkward silence continued, Jung Heewon decided to speak first. "Do you have any questions for me?"
 "What do you want me to ask?"
-I know what to she wanted me to ask. However, there were some things I didn't ask because I already knew the answer.
+I know what she wanted me to ask. However, there were some things I didn't ask because I already knew the answer.
 "Um… my favourite colour or favourite food," Jung Heewon replied.
 "Those are questions that wouldn't be asked even in blind dates."
 "…Has Dokja-ssi been on a blind date?"

chapters/orv/chap_00162.txt

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Lee Jihye patted Shin Yoosung's shoulder and once again realized reality. Only o
 She looked around and noticed that everyone was uneasy. The two children who depended on Kim Dokja, the soldier who only knew the manual, the female swordsman who was unable to properly cope with her power…
 <!>[The constellation 'Maritime War God' criticizes the patriotism of the incarnation 'Lee Jihye'.]
 Lee Jihye scoffed and blocked her ears, shouting 'abababa' to tune it out.
-'By the way, the soldier is going it again'.
+'By the way, the soldier is doing it again'.
 Lee Hyunsung was staring blankly at something. Lee Jihye knew what he was looking at and laughed. It might not be a bad thing to temporarily relax.
 "Hey Kid." Lee Jihye watched Lee Hyunsung approaching something and suddenly opened her mouth. "Do you want me to show you something fun?"
 

chapters/orv/chap_00165.txt

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ After Dionysus' incarnation left, Han Sooyoung asked me with a serious expressio
 "I don't know."
 "You don't know? It was filtered for you as well?"
 I didn't hear it. However, I could vaguely guess what he meant. It was probably related to the 'end' of all scenarios. Then it was natural to be filtered.
-I was challenging the 10th scenario and just became a scenario. I couldn't get all information at will.
+I was challenging the 10th scenario and just became a constellation. I couldn't get all information at will.
 Han Sooyoung stared at me with a grumpy expression and made a small sigh. "…By the way, what are you going to do about your fate? It must be really dangerous if the constellations of Olympus are directly coming to warn you."
 "It looks like it."
 "Is there no way to completely stop the fate?"

chapters/orv/chap_00168.txt

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ Tears flowed from Reinheit's eyes. "I, I really…"
 Reinheit slowly closed his eyes at the short answer.
 Yoo Joonghyuk spoke once again. "Everybody knows."
 Of course they knew. Reinheit burst out laughing when he saw the life that he lived was so easily seen. "Strange. Why… do I feel like you actually understand…"
-Yoo Joonghyuk stared down at Reinheit. It wasn't in this round of regression but Yoo Joonghyuk had also sympathized with Reinheit's will. The memories of raising Paradise together and then destroying Paradise weer still clear.
+Yoo Joonghyuk stared down at Reinheit. It wasn't in this round of regression but Yoo Joonghyuk had also sympathized with Reinheit's will. The memories of raising Paradise together and then destroying Paradise were still clear.
 As if to reciprocate the feelings, Reinheit spoke in a pained voice. "You… will go to the next floor?"
 The next floor. This was the location of the last scenario of Dark Castle.
 "You… won't find what you are looking for. This castle, it is just the constellations' playground. So be careful. The next floor…"
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ No, why was my name listed all of a sudden?
 Uriel, who had been quiet for a while, started jumping with excitement. I would've scolded her previously but after the banquet, harsh words couldn't emerge.
 However, that Yoo Joonghyuk bastard… he was really mysterious. That egoist couldn't hand his achievements to other people. Did he want to make friends with me now?
 It wasn't possible.
-That reminded me, all the party members except for myself and Han Sooyoung were gathered in one place. No, Gong Pilduwasn't present… damn, where did that guy go?
+That reminded me, all the party members except for myself and Han Sooyoung were gathered in one place. No, Gong Pildu wasn't present… damn, where did that guy go?
 "By the way, why are you looking for Dokja ahjussi?"
 The people who were excited about the chimera dragon tamed by Shin Yoosung and Lee Gilyoung started talking about me.
 "That…"

chapters/orv/chap_00198.txt

@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ My heart sank. "What? Who?"
 If I remembered correctly, Jang Hayoung was a man. The damn writer of Ways of Survival accepted all my comments and changed just one thing. It was this guy's gender.
 Jang Hayoung raised his eyebrows and frowned. "Earth is the only place that judges by the cover."
 I was about to respond when the pub owner suddenly turned off the lights. Then he declared to the whole pub in a very low voice, "Night is coming."
-At these words, a deep silence spread through the pub. It was a silent that was much more sensitive and sharper than when the word 'disaster' emerged. Jang Hayoung faced me and brought a finger to his lips.
+At these words, a deep silence spread through the pub. It was a silence that was much more sensitive and sharper than when the word 'disaster' emerged. Jang Hayoung faced me and brought a finger to his lips.
 "Shhh."
 Looking closer, it wasn't only this pub. Other pubs and stores on the street had closed their doors and turned off the lights. Suddenly, all sounds disappeared.
 It was as if all of the industrial complex was submerged deep in the ocean. In the streets where every person had disappeared, the dreary sound of flutes was heard. Some citizens blocked their ears in order to avoid hearing it.
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ The appearance reminded me of a reaper and it was twice the size of an adult mal
 <!>[The target is under the protection of the current scenario.]
 <!>[The target is currently invincible.]
 No existence could resist the Execution during the Night of the industrial complex.
-The owner who gave me food and who those who watched the scenario were looking down at the floor with tired expressions.
+The owner who gave me food and those who watched the scenario were looking down at the floor with tired expressions.
 Today the Executioner chose this pub as his place of execution. In this place, someone would surely die.
 <@>[Who is the revo lu tion ary?]
 Every time the executioner's scythe slammed into the ground, people curled up. It was like a play. I stared carefully and the surprised Jang Hayoung pulled at my collar.